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Post by CEO Harvey McCutchins on Jan 16, 2011 19:09:49 GMT -5
Feedback for Cole's RPs here.
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Post by Sarah Twilight on Jan 25, 2011 20:05:33 GMT -5
I've said it during numerous posts already, but the fact is, I just love your RPs. It's no surprise to me at all that you're in the World Championship match at our first PPV.
It's about the style. I think that's what catches my attention. Everyone has their own way of presentation when it comes to roleplays and most of them are very enjoyable. But the style that you present of all first person, the thought processes etc...is something I have never seen pulled off well at all, until you.
About the only critique I would have as far as the character goes would be the presentation of smoking weed. There is no problem with having the character do so, just that the presentation sounded like perhaps what a guy would say to describe it. And I totally understand you are a male handler. I was just pointing it out in a friendly way of critique. But overall, great stuff!
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Post by CEO Harvey McCutchins on Jan 25, 2011 20:11:57 GMT -5
About the only critique I would have as far as the character goes would be the presentation of smoking weed. There is no problem with having the character do so, just that the presentation sounded like perhaps what a guy would say to describe it. Is it how a guy would describe it however, could it also not be how your typical "tom boy" would describe it? Seems to me that the Rachel Cole character is very tom boyish in nature anyway. Just sayin LOL
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Post by "The Cult Classic" Rachel Cole on Jan 25, 2011 20:23:39 GMT -5
Firstly, thank you for the kind words... that means alot coming from you.
And I completely understand where you are coming from when it comes to weed. Honestly, I am neither a girl nor do I smoke weed that often... so it was a risky character choice. While she is very tom boyish, I will admit that it might not be the way an actual girl approaches weed. Most of the girl smokers I know are either complete moonbeam hippies and are very up front about their smoking (kind of like Cole) or they are very reserved about it. But Twilight is right, it is something that can possibly be re-worked to be a tad bit more realistic.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 27, 2011 0:22:55 GMT -5
I like your roleplays.
Just one thing, in both OOC and IC posts I've seen from you that bothers the hell out of me.
And this goes for anyone else reading this as well:
A lot. It's two words. Not one. Two. A-space-lot.
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Post by Sarah Twilight on Feb 22, 2011 19:16:35 GMT -5
Another great roleplay and another example of why you're world champ right now. So....I have to ask. Does this mean you recently attended a concert irl? I know some people use parts of a recent real life experience for roleplays....so had to wonder.
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Post by "The Cult Classic" Rachel Cole on Feb 22, 2011 19:20:30 GMT -5
Yeah, I saw 311 at the Grove last night and it was one of the coolest shows I have ever seen.
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