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Post by CEO Harvey McCutchins on Jan 16, 2011 19:14:10 GMT -5
Feedback for Ronan's RPs here.
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maximilion
Junior Member
One Man Militia
Posts: 76
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Post by maximilion on Jan 18, 2011 17:57:10 GMT -5
I really enjoy the character as a whole. Your unique writing style and ability to tell a good story will take you far.
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Post by Not Super Pollo on Jan 19, 2011 22:48:46 GMT -5
Will their be a segment called the "Galen Challenge"?
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 19, 2011 22:50:28 GMT -5
Will their be a segment called the "Galen Challenge"? ...Maybe. I don't get it.
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Post by Robbie Ferrari on Jan 19, 2011 22:53:09 GMT -5
He wants to know if you buy him some them thick cut pizza chips.
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Post by Not Super Pollo on Jan 19, 2011 23:00:33 GMT -5
ever heard of the Gallon Challenge?
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 19, 2011 23:05:28 GMT -5
Isn't that where you chug milk...?
...Yeah I don't think I'll be doing that anytime soon.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 20, 2011 13:27:42 GMT -5
Welp... first ever match-roleplay here in RoR. It'd be longer, but my creativity's been sapped recently. Any feedback is welcome.
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Post by "The Cult Classic" Rachel Cole on Jan 20, 2011 13:44:45 GMT -5
You actually have the ideal length with this RP. As a guy who used to write 25 page epics, believe me, it doesn't pay off as much as you think it does. You'll end up repeating yourself... or boring your reader. And that is my advice, don't worry about your length so much because what you have right now is a great RP. Maybe a moment of dialogue would have been useful so it wasn't paragraph after paragraph of narrative, but finding moments to add dialogue is hard when you are on a roll with fantastic narrative. But yeah, that is my advice... don't worry about length and little hints of dialogue. Great RP.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 20, 2011 13:56:09 GMT -5
Thanks. Yeah, dialogue isn't something I really like working with so I kindof try to narrate most of the thoughts and emotions 'n' such.
And as for the length thing: I don't usually measure the length of my roleplays, but this one just seemed kindof like a quick read as I was re-reading it, which is why I mentioned it. *Shrug*
Kinda hard to work an RP when you don't know who your opponents are going to be, but eh.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 28, 2011 20:41:14 GMT -5
Tried a bit more dialogue-heavy, promo-type roleplay. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks. ~Galen
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 6, 2011 0:30:33 GMT -5
Well, yet another roleplay up. And this time it has sex in it! Almost. Kindof. Not really. But any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
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